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He's perfect. What's not to love?
He's so moronic. What does she see in him?
I need her.
I wonder if he notices me.
I hate the way he looks at her.
What can she do for me today?
Does he feel the same way?
Can't she see he doesn't reciprocate her feelings?
How does she not see I don't feel the same way?
I hope he does.
Is she under some spell or something? Really?
I've got her wrapped around my finger.
I think I'll go looking for him.
Maybe I should tell her.
I wonder where she's off to today.
Will he be happy to see me?
Will she want to listen?
Will she be able to do it all?... For me, she will.
There he is. Looking as amazing as he usually does.
There she is... looking at him adoringly as always.
Ah, there she is. Ready to practically wait on me hand and foot.
Oh! He's looking right at me!
Great, she's blushing at a mere look from him.
I know what she's going to do for me today.
By that look, does it mean he likes me too?
How can she not see it so plainly on his face?!
This is too easy.
Maybe I should ask my friend for some advice about this. He's a boy.
Oh no, she's looking at me now. Now I'm blushing.
Why is she looking at him?
He's always so supportive.
She only sees me as a friend. How lovely...
He needs to leave.
And always knows what to say.
I wish I knew how to tell her how I really feel. To tell her the truth about this how ordeal.
I tell her all the time to stop talking to him.
He's going to make some girl really happy one day.
One day, I want her to be my girl... again.
I pity the girl who gets stuck with that man.
He just needs to stop being so shy. We both do, I suppose.
Ugh, I'm too much of a good guy.
He doesn't belong here.
He needs to take more risks. Again, we both do.
I need to be more bold, like she suggested.
He's caused us enough problems.
Should I just blurt it out now then?
Should I just blurt it out to her now?
Should I just get rid of him now?
No, not yet. It needs to be more personal.
No, not yet. I don't want to pressure her into anything. Especially with him making this messier.
No, not yet. Maybe tonight when she's sleeping.
I'll just join my friend instead.
I just want to keep her happy. I wish that didn't involve him though.
Plus, if I do it now, she won't do what I want.
Why can't it be this easy walking up to him as it is walking up to my friend?
Why can't she smile at me like she smiles at him?
Why is she going over to him?
I hope we remain friends.
I hope this doesn't last forever. I can't take this much longer.
I hope he gets lost out in the woods.
"Hey there." You're such an amazing friend.
"Hello to you too." I love you so much it's almost pathetic.
"..."
He's so moronic. What does she see in him?
I need her.
I wonder if he notices me.
I hate the way he looks at her.
What can she do for me today?
Does he feel the same way?
Can't she see he doesn't reciprocate her feelings?
How does she not see I don't feel the same way?
I hope he does.
Is she under some spell or something? Really?
I've got her wrapped around my finger.
I think I'll go looking for him.
Maybe I should tell her.
I wonder where she's off to today.
Will he be happy to see me?
Will she want to listen?
Will she be able to do it all?... For me, she will.
There he is. Looking as amazing as he usually does.
There she is... looking at him adoringly as always.
Ah, there she is. Ready to practically wait on me hand and foot.
Oh! He's looking right at me!
Great, she's blushing at a mere look from him.
I know what she's going to do for me today.
By that look, does it mean he likes me too?
How can she not see it so plainly on his face?!
This is too easy.
Maybe I should ask my friend for some advice about this. He's a boy.
Oh no, she's looking at me now. Now I'm blushing.
Why is she looking at him?
He's always so supportive.
She only sees me as a friend. How lovely...
He needs to leave.
And always knows what to say.
I wish I knew how to tell her how I really feel. To tell her the truth about this how ordeal.
I tell her all the time to stop talking to him.
He's going to make some girl really happy one day.
One day, I want her to be my girl... again.
I pity the girl who gets stuck with that man.
He just needs to stop being so shy. We both do, I suppose.
Ugh, I'm too much of a good guy.
He doesn't belong here.
He needs to take more risks. Again, we both do.
I need to be more bold, like she suggested.
He's caused us enough problems.
Should I just blurt it out now then?
Should I just blurt it out to her now?
Should I just get rid of him now?
No, not yet. It needs to be more personal.
No, not yet. I don't want to pressure her into anything. Especially with him making this messier.
No, not yet. Maybe tonight when she's sleeping.
I'll just join my friend instead.
I just want to keep her happy. I wish that didn't involve him though.
Plus, if I do it now, she won't do what I want.
Why can't it be this easy walking up to him as it is walking up to my friend?
Why can't she smile at me like she smiles at him?
Why is she going over to him?
I hope we remain friends.
I hope this doesn't last forever. I can't take this much longer.
I hope he gets lost out in the woods.
"Hey there." You're such an amazing friend.
"Hello to you too." I love you so much it's almost pathetic.
"..."
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It was just a kiss
an innocent slip
a passionate touch
It was just a kiss
a cushion of lust
a glossed grace
it was just a kiss
don't look too deeply
for depth and meaning
It was just a kiss
let it be...
An act that could change
a single life
An act that could spiral
out of control
a gateway drug
to love
It was just a kiss
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"You're mixing water in your coke again."
"I know."
"You do that when you worry."
"I'm always worried."
"No, you're usually cinnamon-in-your-tea worried. This is water-in-coke worried and that is seriously beginning to freak me out."
"I know."
"..."
"What?"
"What are you worried about?"
"You're going to think it's stupid."
"Try me."
"Well...do you ever wonder about the kind of guy you're waiting for?"
"I think we all wonder about that guy, love."
"I've been thinking about him more often than not lately. What he would be like, I mean."
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Again, not even sure if this is really a poem
So yeah, I got a way better response to that last 'poem' than I expected. A few people suggested I do another. And at first I had no idea what to do because I didn't want to do the exact same thing. But then last night I got a sudden idea to see not just the one character's POV, but the girl's, his and the other guy's POV. The full 'love triangle' (clever title, no?).
So here it is.
The top is the girl, the italics are the same guy from the last poem [link] (who I am still obssessing over, because I feel so bad for him) and the bold lines are the other guy. I don't know if I like this one as much as the other one, but then again, I hardly ever like my own work.
Feedback would be lovely, since this is only my 2nd attempt at poetry. Did is suck, was it okay, what do you think of the people (because they may be characters in a possible story of mine)? Anything is very much appreciated
So yeah, I got a way better response to that last 'poem' than I expected. A few people suggested I do another. And at first I had no idea what to do because I didn't want to do the exact same thing. But then last night I got a sudden idea to see not just the one character's POV, but the girl's, his and the other guy's POV. The full 'love triangle' (clever title, no?).
So here it is.
The top is the girl, the italics are the same guy from the last poem [link] (who I am still obssessing over, because I feel so bad for him) and the bold lines are the other guy. I don't know if I like this one as much as the other one, but then again, I hardly ever like my own work.
Feedback would be lovely, since this is only my 2nd attempt at poetry. Did is suck, was it okay, what do you think of the people (because they may be characters in a possible story of mine)? Anything is very much appreciated
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I love this so much!!!