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Is love just one look and you instantly know they're the one?
You falling for someone at first sight?
You're completely captivated by their beauty and presence?
You feel this infatuation you can't deny with all your might?

Is love always needing to be by their side?
Because any moment without them isn't worth living?
Because it pains you to see them go?
Because you don't feel whole when you're not touching?

Is love wanting to kiss them every moment,
Of every minute, of every hour, of every day for the rest of eternity?
Is love yearning to hold them close to you,
For what feels like infinity?

Is love certainty?
Or is it immediate?
Or unshakable?
Or passionate?

Is love knowing you want to spend the rest of your life with them?

Well, maybe it is. But here's my theory:

Love is getting to know someone over time.
You look at them and you have no idea what lies ahead.
You're still willing to take that leap of faith for them.
You might end up denying it at some point, but eventually, it needs to be said.

Love is knowing when they need space.
Because you should cherish the moments you spend together.
Because, really, you can't always be by their side. Really.
Because while you might hate being apart, it makes reunions so much better.

Love is always wanting to scream and pull you hair out,
For not only your mistakes, but theirs.
Love is also turning around with an easy smile
And running a hand through their hair.

Love is absolute uncertainty.
And it's gradual.
And intimidating.
And fragile.

Love is not caring if you have a lifetime with them as long as you have them right now.

At least for me it is.
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Crappy poem is crappy.

But, hey, it rhymes!

Honestly though, I don't know if I should get cool points for that, or if they should be taken away.

This was sort of a spur of the moment thing that kinda goes along with another story I'm working on. I would post some of that, but it was one of the works of mine that got lost when my jump drive broke. It wasn't a lot. Just one random chapter and a few excerpts, but I've felt no motivation to redo it.

I know it's a mess. Don't judge me.

I don't know what else to put in this description, so I'm just going to stop talking now...
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~CandyAM Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwww I liek what are you talking about?!!? D:<<<
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wow, very deep words that are true.
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~xxEmi-AnGeL-chanxx Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I really like this, it's sweet and cute and stuff!
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Thats so sweet! I love it!! it is not crappy at all! i think you did a great job.
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~harrypotterfan21 Jul 10, 2012  Student Writer
awww. that was really sweet. :)

I thought it was a great poem. And even if you think it's a mess (which it's not), poetry just might not be your thing. I know it's not mine.
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~featherback Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This isn't crappy! It's beautiful! <333
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~crazyBookworm013 Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I think this is a great way to describe love. I find the spur in the moment poems have the most emotion. And this poem really makes one think.
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